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CommentsBeautiful... right down to the texture on the wings and focus past the foreground edge of the front wing.
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Originality: Its hard to comment on the originality of a simple butterfly, but pushing the subject to one side of your frame, simply is unoriginal.
Technique: The focus on the butterfly is nice, but the left wing, which is closest to us is caught in the depth of field, making the subject appear almost flat, as the closest point is what draws my eye to the frame. Also, this leaves the pine needles directly below it in the same sharp portion of your focal point, which my eyes are drawn to every time I look at this frame.
Impact: I feel that there would have been another way around shooting this frame, as butterflies are known not to be skittish for the most part. Perhaps just taking it in landscape format would have pulled me in the other direction, or maybe even a simple square crop, but as it is the elements I talked about above need to be addressed.
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